From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

{Let me know your interpetations, honestly}

Spawn

Since we can not part

I

drink

Vermouth

Like a thirsty child

No spawn to show

(Ha,

I

must

crazy)

But, it's worth it

I've loved,

I've

loved

so

much

But, now I'm dead inside

I killed my babies

As

I

killed

my

love

We're finally free...

From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

Twisted indeed, but

it's interesting.

My interpretation -

forgive me if it's horribly

off - would be that this

has to do with an abortion(?).

It sounds like it's a woman

saying she's loved but then

she's gotten rid of her unborn

children and, in doing so, she's

given herself freedom as well

as freedom to her unborn children

to escape the cruelties of life.

And I noticed that you've got

some kind of structure in every

stanza as if you're trying

to make it look like something...

I can't quite figure out the shape

but it's very much there.

From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

a a little twisted but still good.

From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

each man kills the things he loves.

and i just killed my love of poetry by reading that linguistical rape.

From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

you lost me on this one...beam me up xena

From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

cool

From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

spooky, a little scary.

From a "challenge on MySpace, is this too twisted?

The guit of abortion is felt by this woman in the poem and resulted in her act of taking her life. Anger she felt, a very angry woman .....and yet there is remorse and regret that haunt her as she live her life......only death can finaly rid her of all anger, remorse and regret.